Ross help me with my website copy please

Discussion in 'Website Critiques & Web Copy' started by Kipp, Jun 19, 2014.

  1. TheEyeball

    TheEyeball Friend of the Ladies

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    I did a full 30 days and it's amazing the perspective you have. Many times I'd think stuff like "Man, I really don't want to call this old customer and see if he wants to schedule again. He seemed like he didn't really like me last time". But then I'd tell myself "Pfft, I took a 7 minute cold shower this morning. If I can do that, I can call this jerk."

    I know it sounds goofy but you should try it. You'll be surprised what it does to you. Now, that having been said, I am really enjoying warm showers again. Why, just tonight I enjoyed a looooong, hoooot, steamy shower and made it half way through Blast Tyrant (one of the best rock albums in the history of the Multiverse) on my Bose Mini Soundlink. It was fantastic.
     
  2. TheEyeball

    TheEyeball Friend of the Ladies

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    You can always just google carpet cleaners from different cities all over and just rip off all the best stuff you find.
     
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  3. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    Great idea! Think I'll start with Carmel Indiana!
     
  4. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    Your mom
     
  5. fencerider

    fencerider Entrepreneur

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    You just the love the juicy gossip dontcha? Happy to help get your soap opera fix.
     
  6. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    That's some really good info there...is that what's in those books you guys keep reading...might have to try that sometime!
     
  7. Harry Mullett

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    Here you go, has a nice ring to it! :D

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  8. Kipp

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    Okay, guarantee updated check it out
     
  9. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    It's on the home page of my site
     
  10. Carpet-Rx of Louisville

    Carpet-Rx of Louisville Syndicated FatCat Entreprenuer

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    still has errors dude
     
  11. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    The whole site does I'm not open yet .,. Don't worry I'll have Torrey proof read it
     
  12. Torrey W

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    Sweet!
    I'm dropping me a back link in it.
     
  13. Carpet-Rx of Louisville

    Carpet-Rx of Louisville Syndicated FatCat Entreprenuer

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    I like the presentation of the free spotter shipped to them for filling out the form...i almost filled it out myself.
     
  14. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    If you only knew what a back link was...
     
  15. Torrey W

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    I was gonna ask you in a PM... :oops:
     
  16. TheEyeball

    TheEyeball Friend of the Ladies

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    Since Kipp probably posted this thread at TMF too, I'm curious what the guys named Ross over there had to say.
     
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  17. Kipp

    Kipp Syndicated Entrepreneur

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    He thought I should make my prespray my USP....
     
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